Feedback on roughcut

>Many people didn't understand the storyline and were confused by the fact there was more than one girl, when we are able to shot more then it will become more obvious to the audience.

>The majority liked the opening scene with the feet walking up to the door and as the door is opened the male character begins to sing.

>Good idea/acting/performance.

>End part dragged on too long.

>lip-syncing affective although more needed.

>Good pace at the beginning.

>Good variety of locations.

>Interesting to watch.

Overall we need to add more variety of shots and the storyline needs to be made more clear. Filming difficult as a member of our group, who happens to be the main character, has left college, therefore our media group. We hope to be able to get more filming completed over half term so we can get more footage.